I Love Haikus! Forum Hot Potato Haiku

Delight is simple
explode from your thick, dark shell
as you gasp for air

Okay here's a new one.


It's limbs sway slowly

It's limbs sway slowly
Man, beast, or what; we don't know

It's limbs sway slowly
Man, beast or what, we don't know,
Aching to reach out


Okay, here goes another one:

She had danced for him

She had danced for him
as his mind drifted toward

She had danced for him
as his mind drifted toward
the female essence

And another:

deceptive delight

Deceptive delight
veiled are your true intentions

Deceptive delight
veiled are your true intentions
false pretenses lurk

yaaay, i hope this keeps going =) i'll start another:


dear, just hold me close

Dear just hold me close
Autumn soon fades to winter

Dear just hold me close
Autumn soon fades to winter
Wishing it was spring.



The hands of fate are

The hands of fate are
The cruelest of all masters

The hands of fate are
The cruelest of all masters
Without exception.

Feather light eyelash

Feather light eyelash
hide chocolate swirled brown eyes

Feather light eyelash
hide chocolate swirled brown eyes
ever so slighty.


Magnanimous heights

Magnanimous heights
Lead to possible greatness

Magnanimous heights
Lead to possible greatness
Balance idle wires


aerie smolder roils

Tangled hearts subdued

aerie smolder roils
tangled hearts subdued
by calming visions.



affairs of the heart

affairs of the heart
messy, but satisfying