Here There Be Monsters Forum Looking for HARSH reviewers

Looking for harsh reviewers to help me edit and revise my book. It is finished but rough. Looking for a small team to help me make it wonderful. Anyone willing to help will get mentioned in acknowledgements as well as receive a free copy of it once it is published next year! I need 5 people who are interested to help me mold this into something worthy of publishing. I am looking for people who can help me with flow, interest, word usage, grammar, ect.