Here There Be Monsters Forum In need of help

Hi all,
I have recently started a novel Stardust and would like to get some criticism/comments on it. So far there are only two chapters and a prologue.
Here is a short sum of the book:

Reckless Lisa is desperately trying no to lose her grip with reality as she wastes her life in a cloud of smoke and drugs. Instead of creating tangible universes she brings destruction to herself and chases stardust at nights.

Thank you for your time. I'll make sure I'll review your work too