Here There Be Monsters Forum The Monster Within

I have posted a short story called The Golden Rule that I would like you to read and critique if you would take the time. It is about how even the most mild of us has the potential to release the monster within.
Be brutally honest with your comments and critisisms, that is the only way I will ever get better at this sickness that we all share. thanks and God bless...

Steve

Got tons to read and not much time to scan material, much less read anything that isn't highly recommended.

Why don't you give us a hint as to what your story is about. What's unique? What would Stephen King wish he could steal? Maybe even give us a short synopsis to get us interested, like a trailer on a coming movie.