Free Reviews(^-^) Forum Hello There, Critiques Please?

If you've got a moment to spare, I'd really appreciate some input on my novel- it's called "The Wolfsbayne Chronicles: Rise Of The Beast" and as I'm mostly a self-taught writer I feel like I need some input on the wording, the characters and the way it all plays out so far.
There's a bit of it posted here, so if you find the time in your busy day to critique my novel I'd really appreciate it! I'll critique something of yours as well, if you'd like.