Fantasy Writers Guild Forum looking for a critique of my f..

neilbco

looking for a critique of my fantasy novella 12 Years Ago Hello, I am new here. I have finished a first draft of a fantasy novella, Wizard under Fire. It Is about a 26-year-old female wizard who works for The Department of Homeland Security fighting terrorists and terrorist wizards. She is one-half of a Ghost Team, which consists of a wizard and a former Special Forces officer.  I am willing to critique or review someone's fantasy novella or novel in exchange for a critique of mine. Examples of my writing are available on Amazon.com. If you have any questions please contact me. Neil