Addiction For Fiction! Forum Hi, I'm new.

Hey there all.   I've just joined up. I dont have alot of pieces, im working on something at the moment. It's called 'In The Hundt" I just posted it on this group. If you'd all be so kind as to read through it and review it; so i can get some pointers that'd be much appreciated.     I havnt done much writing in the past few years, i've been busy with parent hood and some traumatic experiences, such as my son getting cancer. But have had this idea in my head for a few months now. The last time I really activelly wrote anything was when i was in my teens so i wasnt fantastic then.   I could use all the help I can get so if you're up for it, review my work please.
Thanks. Francinebc xx