A B N A Vets Forum Want a review?

I just got done critiquing Supernatural Kiss's Red Night.  Go read it; you won't be disappointed.  But now I have nothing to use to procrastinate.  Want me to review your work?

I won't pull punches, so make sure you want an honest review and not just someone to validate your writing.  :)

I prefer romance, but if you have an interesting story, I'm good with that, too.

Anyone?  Bueller?

I always want reviews.  Mine's high fantasy, so if you're not comfortable with that, you can give it a pass -- but I've had many non-fantasy readers tell me they found mine surprisingly readable.

I definitely want a review of my beginning fifty pages, on two for that matter.  I'd be happy to swap.

 

Now, if I can figure out how to post it, I'll be all set.  Look for my piece (s) around here soon!

 

thank you,

Michelle

Done and done.  Michelle, just let me know when you figure out how to post if you don't see me commenting.  :)

Got it.  I put up several chunks for your review.

 

thanks,

M

Hi folks,

I've just joined ABNA Vets on Writer's Cafe.  I posted a new short story on which I'm working.  It may even be the first chapter of my next novel.  I'd love some feedback on it.  I'm going to browse through the other submissions to give my feedback, too.  My story is called "The Waiting."