A B N A Vets Forum Hi! Im New....

Hi All!

Im new around this neck of the woods but I am really interested in getting some feedback on the excerpt that was sent to ABNA. I am wondering if I am totally off base to think that I just happened to get one of those weird judges that doesnt like crime/mysetery/suspense novels.

I know in my heart that I have a long way to go to make it into a local bookstore near you but I would love to hear what you all have to say about my excerpt. and what I might be able to do next time to make it better....

Feel free to be brutally honest with me.... I can take it!

I will be more than happy to recipicate any reviews that come floating my way with a review of any piece you would like me to look at!

Take care!

Ally