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Im planing on publishing a book of mine. Im still working on it and I would greatly appreciate it if a few people went and let me know about what they think of the story so far. Yes, spelling and grammar are my mortal enemies, and im still adding, and editing little things here and there so I apologize in advance.

There are also two people writing the book, myself and my friend. So if you get confused by the writing thats why.

Thank you to anyone who dose.