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Back with the rewrite and need help

4 Years Ago


Hello, I'm back after nearly 5years. I have rewritten my story now and looking for some feedbacks and help what could be still improved. The old version is still available , so you can still check it out and compare. Thank you for your time and let's be friends that helps each other :) Aya