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I'll start:

I'm 16, and focus on the romantic genre. I'm more of a reader than a writer, but I have written a couple of short stories. 

I'm very much looking forward to reading other's posts - any recommendations? 

[Verse 1]

The darkness starts to clench you

You feel it deep inside

They use their tongues against you

That's why you built your walls so high

Who was it that convinced you

Who pushed you toward this paradigm

Come back home, I miss you,

Just give me one chance to change your mind

It's tough watchin' you drowning

I know it's hard to fight the truth

But this disease you're housing

Is bound to drain the life from you

You know I'll die and fight for you

Till the weight breaks my backbone

Till then I won't lose sight of you

I miss you, Come back home

[Chorus]

You break down, and I hate to see

Your secrets fine, You're safe with me

We could leave here, Right now together

Come and see, Just put some faith in me

Your heart's the greatest thing I own

The past has shown, I can't let go

And your love's the greatest feeling that I've known

I miss you, Come back home

[Verse 2]

Everything's right where you left it

Nothing's changed, Nothing's gone

Your smile still leaves me breathless

And I'll be there when somethings wrong

You know I'll die and fight for you

Till the weight breaks my backbone

Till then I won't lose sight of you

I miss you, Come back home

[Chorus]

You break down, and I hate to see

Your secrets fine, You're safe with me

We could leave here, Right now together

Come and see, Just put some faith in me

Your heart's the greatest thing I own

The past has shown, I can't let go

And your love's the greatest feeling that I've known

I miss you, Come back home

My name is Gavin, and I'm a British expat currently living in China. I'm also a fantasy writer, and hoping to be published in the near future. I've written a full-length fantasy novel which is in the last stages of editing, and am currently sharing my other work. At the minute, I'm writing a collection of short stories based in the world of my fantasy novel, a YA sci-fi novel and a YA fantasy novel.

I would love it if you could take the time to read over some of my short stories! I've posted them in this group, so feel free to have a read. I hope you enjoy them! If anyone would like me to review or read their work, let me know as I would be happy to!

Take it easy, everyone!

Gavin

My name is Gavin, and I'm a British expat currently living in China. I'm also a fantasy writer, and hoping to be published in the near future. I've written a full-length fantasy novel which is in the last stages of editing, and am currently sharing my other work. At the minute, I'm writing a collection of short stories based in the world of my fantasy novel, a YA sci-fi novel and a YA fantasy novel.

I would love it if you could take the time to read over some of my short stories! I've posted them in this group, so feel free to have a read. I hope you enjoy them! If anyone would like me to review or read their work, let me know as I would be happy to!

Take it easy, everyone!

Gavin

A Realistic Romance about a lonely, depressed boy in Louie Rook, whose world gets turned upside down when Gina Blue moves into his town. The real question is, however: For better or worse?

So far I have the Prologue and first Chapter, and it's a work in progress.

I just wanted to say hi and that I'm looking forward to sharing some of my work with writers like myself. 

Thanks

Go to my profile and read my shortstory