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Name: Asher TravonAge:17Looks: http://data.whicdn.com/images/182857682/superthumb.jpgLikes: Reading, astrology, biting his lip, playing piano, working at the local hospital, to learn new things, the colour turquoise, peach roses, smelling goodDislikes: Bad hygiene, greasy/ oily fair,  cats, anything with more than four legs, anything that’s an insect, amphibians, rudenessPhobias: Astraphobia, Glossophobia, Philophobia, KinemortophobiaFlaws: Naive, quiet, shy, blunt, self-destructive (in the slightest), disturbed, Impish once knownBackground:He came from a small family. Just him his mother, his brother and him. His dad committed suicide when he was 10 years old and he is still very deeply hurt by it. He doesn’t like to talk about it, and prefers to keep in on the down low. Extra: He works at the hospital, helping with dietary needs and the nursing of patient

Name: Loek HansonAGe: 17Looks:https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/bb/fd/46/bbfd46aa5810716da4cb3d9aa00eebe6.jpgLikes:To hang out with his guys, food, hitting on girls, the colour blue, dogs, math (but he would never admit to it), listening to music, being in his room, being aloneDislikes: reading, learning new things, country music, overly nice people, the colour red, and short short hair, bad hygiene Flaws/phobias: he doesn’t listen very well, likes to do his own thing, likes to ditch classes. Arachnophobia, philophobia, Nyctophobia, lastrophobiaBackground: He came from a large family being caught in the middle of five siblings. His mom and dad are both with him. He is disconnected from the family, typically able to get away with anything. Extra?: A bit of a player, knows how to his katana, slight twang in his voice

Name:Blake WIlliamsonAge:17Looks: colour purple, soft music, romance, romance novels, things related to tech, smart people, people who talk book, walks on the beach, swimming and cakeDislikes: Ice Cream, A-holes, people who hate on gays, Flaws/phobias: She has freckles scattered about her face and body, slow thinking, deeply passionate about everything. Bathophobia, numerophobia, TaphophobiaBackground: She came from a middle class family, going to a public school. She was raised on exactly what she needed and always had money. It was never a problem. She was raised happy and polite. Extra: She doesn’t play an instrument, and is a little gay.

Name:Jade AlgomaAge:16Looks:http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/shadowsinthesandbox/images/d/dd/Sweet_Emily_Rudd.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20140117031913Likes: reading, having select friends, listening to music, working at the coffee shop on the corner, learning different languages, making people happy, cats and birds. Dislikes: people who are angry, people raising their voice to her, putting a hand up, answering questions, public speakingflaws/phobias:She is a keep self, she doesn’t like people, she has anxietyOmbrophobia, apiphobia, globophobiaBackground: She was raised in a household with parents who were always fighting and eventually divorced. She likes to be quiet, and she is very shy due to the way she was left alone for so many hours a night. Extra: She has her ears and nose pierced.

Storylines: Yours are acceptable also

An island. You have been cast away there with one other person. The thing is, if you find them you have to kill them. If you are successful your life can continue and you can go back to your loved ones. LIttle did you know that every pair that enters onto the island are a pair of soulmates, each perfect for eachother. Will they end up killing each other or ending up in love?
You’ve been able to read minds since you were a young child, always invading people’s thoughts. But one day you're sitting in class and someone asks you a question. It isn’t out loud, it’s in your head like you're able to do. You thought you were alone but you're not, all this time you thought anyway. You don’t know where the voice came from, but you have to find out. Will you find out? Or will this ‘voice’ remain a mystery?
Glasses. You’ve had glasses since the first time you could open your eyes. Your parents always told you it’s because you can’t see like everyone else, but little did you know they were for hiding. One day someone knocks them off you, they discovered the truth themselves. Will you accept your fate? Or will you run?
A shapeshifter is someone who can change form. That’s what muse B has been doing all their life. It isn’t until he thinks alone he shifts but someone sees him. He quickly panics, not sure what to do or what to think about the strange passerby who saw him. WIll that person rat them out? Or will they help him with his struggle?
Muse A is trekking through the woods. All is well until they stumble upon a tree, a thick and old tree. Muse A feels a pull, or possibly a push that brings them back to the tree. It isn’t until the night of a new moon a stranger reveals himself. Muse A and Muse B are both pixies, their power coming from the ancient powerful tree. How will Muse A react to the news? How will they use their power?
Muse A has been counting down the days , waiting for all time to freeze. Muse B is the only other person who isn’t ‘frozen’. And can save the world. Muse A has to go out and find Muse BB so they can together fix it all, will they find each other? Can they save the world?
Both Muses live in a post apocalyptic world, the world dividing into two different gangs. It has been split, the North and the South. The two muses meet without knowing what gang their from and quickly become friends. Will their friendship last? WIll it become something more?

You live in a dystopian type world where people are born with a date on their wrist. The date signifies when the person will die. You always kept yours hidden because you were supposed to die when you were six. One day a stranger comes up to you asking to see your wrist. You deny, and they force you. There is a society called the watchers, the ones who survive. They look for expired people, and make them greater.
SOmeone new shows up at your school. They are brooding, dark and mysterious. Their voice brings back memories, things you have been through years of therapy to forget. Little did you realize they have always been there, always been around. You just couldn’t name the face in the dark room you were locked in.
Every 5 years, one person is selected to be given a chip. One that allows them to see the truth in life, and the true colours of the world. Ever since kids have been getting them, and they were sent to the ground. These chips provide the rest of the civilization with the information whether earth is inhabitable. Everyone who has been sent down has ‘died.’ That or someone took their chips out. There is a city, rules and other people on earth, all teens and all people who have to survive.
You’re standing over a cliff, a rushing river beneath you. Then you hear footsteps, rapidly coming towards you. Then….they run past and jump. The stranger has been doing this for years, this stranger discovered it when they were younger, when they were pushed. After the stranger falls into the water you don’t see them come back up, Where did they go? What happened to them?

Lets mess it all up with ink paint clay chalk glue ewww

I come here with the intention of getting a feedback on the book i am writing.

It's just in the early beggining (as of today there is just a single chapter LOL) and considering i have english as a second language,i need guidance in the ways of writing, that said i am looking for help to develop my writing style.

I'd kindly thank anyone who could spare a little of their times to help me, and would of course review them as well if needed.

Look forward to working with you guys ^^

I come here with the intention of getting a feedback on the book i am writing.

It's just in the early beggining (as of today there is just a single chapter LOL) and considering i have english as a second language,i need guidance in the ways of writing, that said i am looking for help to develop my writing style.

I'd kindly thank anyone who could spare a little of their times to help me, and would of course review them as well if needed.

Look forward to working with you guys ^^

I come here with the intention of getting a feedback on the book i am writing.

It's just in the early beggining (as of today there is just a single chapter LOL) and considering i have english as a second language,i need guidance in the ways of writing, that said i am looking for help to develop my writing style.

I'd kindly thank anyone who could spare a little of their times to help me, and would of course review them as well if needed.

Look forward to working with you guys ^^

When the sun sets

The darkness arrives

It brings out the criminals

Who lurk through the night

That being said this sounds fricken awesome! 

I would totally be into this. I am up for pretty much anything as far as genre. I generally stick to the fiction realm but I'm all for anime or hey if you want to start some sci fi stuff, I'm all over that! 

I have never done anything as a pirate or sci fi so that should be interesting. Whatever we end up doing, I'm happy to participate and thank you so much for the invite! I feel so honored!!

I am so psyched to work with a group writing situation. I've never done anything like it so can't promise anything but I will give it my all!! Let's get on this guys!