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the plan has changed since i sent the messages out earlier. only slightly, im abandoning the 2nd and 3rd piece to the origional post i was talking about. i am going to post it in this thread so its in on place for you all too see, but yet a private group so its not publicly seen by anyone outside of the members, who as i explained in the message earlier are all people i know and respect for 1 reason or another, im sure most of you know each other any way. 

like i said im going to post the original piece i edited and was talking about here but moving onto the same concept of 3 styles, 3 perspectives being the explination to the challenge the reasoning and something else i dont know yet, have not thought that far ahead but i chose to write about the challenge its self because if im going to do a bucket list challenge i know im going to suck at because im on drugs that i cant think enough to write , and im going to have to in a very literal way relearn my craft, im going to make it about something that matters to me instead of a story about a hypothetical situation, specialy since i have a few of the best people i can think of to help me with corrections, not spelling like s**t we will be here for years, but explaining to the highest of high BLitZ3D the mistakes i made or how this could be worded better , what does not rhyme, and like when i go off on word play , lmk if its to much, thats a huge problem i have with this one im aborting, brutaly honest comments is always good , my feelings dont get hurt easily, and ill be high as f**k when i read and write any of this so it will not matter, i already know im sub par as hell on this s**t, and overly detailed in explinations, like the message i sent to you all earlier and this thread post im writing now, way to much ranting about s**t you understood in the first few sentences, but this is the reason i choce to do mollie for this challenge, distractions , over explaining everything, and explaining why your over explaining everything, is for the reason of being you are haveing trouble finding the correct vocab words to explain the situation correctly in a simple manner, like man if you all could read this as i wrote it without back spaceing you would understand the conundrum mollie puts on writing. (for a small example i new in my mind understand was the word to use, obviously, i could not think of the word so i wrote under the stan, then im like f**k what was i saying, under the stand is not write , then repeated i know it means to make them realize what im sayin to them) so thats my explination of what im changeing why i want a diferent subject and how mollie effects me, as far as side efects of the high and comprimised vocab, in a overly detailed rant form, f**k man , ya this is going to be a challenge indeed. heres the 2nd version of origional one i wrote, its going to end here either being edited and posted or disguarded and trashed depending on everyones opinions of it. im going to start the write now , to write the post now ill post the new one in the threads section here periodicly as i finish sections of it, so check in to see what it is going , and remember it will be the one that matters not this one under this ranting explination , also i guess i should add thoes of you who agreed. and i forgot to post this thread its been done for a while now . so the post that matters is already in progress, that will be next in a new threaD, 

Alright lets do this. The poems topic is silence. You can be super creative, but it must be somewhat connect to silence or something quiet. Ok, now for the rules. You can write 5 lines max after that end the stance with a "?". If you are still editing, use "/?" to let us know your not done. One more thing, the first 1 or 2 lines you create must connect to the previews persons stanza. You can make a new topic by using the last 4 lines that are left. To keep the poem updated and edited, I will be making another thread were you can post the most recent update edition.

Thanks guys for helping and remember this is all in good fun XD

After we finish I will publish it and highlight the parts each one of you wrote and link your accounts

Name: Asher TravonAge:17Looks: http://data.whicdn.com/images/182857682/superthumb.jpgLikes: Reading, astrology, biting his lip, playing piano, working at the local hospital, to learn new things, the colour turquoise, peach roses, smelling goodDislikes: Bad hygiene, greasy/ oily fair,  cats, anything with more than four legs, anything that’s an insect, amphibians, rudenessPhobias: Astraphobia, Glossophobia, Philophobia, KinemortophobiaFlaws: Naive, quiet, shy, blunt, self-destructive (in the slightest), disturbed, Impish once knownBackground:He came from a small family. Just him his mother, his brother and him. His dad committed suicide when he was 10 years old and he is still very deeply hurt by it. He doesn’t like to talk about it, and prefers to keep in on the down low. Extra: He works at the hospital, helping with dietary needs and the nursing of patient

Name: Loek HansonAGe: 17Looks:https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/bb/fd/46/bbfd46aa5810716da4cb3d9aa00eebe6.jpgLikes:To hang out with his guys, food, hitting on girls, the colour blue, dogs, math (but he would never admit to it), listening to music, being in his room, being aloneDislikes: reading, learning new things, country music, overly nice people, the colour red, and short short hair, bad hygiene Flaws/phobias: he doesn’t listen very well, likes to do his own thing, likes to ditch classes. Arachnophobia, philophobia, Nyctophobia, lastrophobiaBackground: He came from a large family being caught in the middle of five siblings. His mom and dad are both with him. He is disconnected from the family, typically able to get away with anything. Extra?: A bit of a player, knows how to his katana, slight twang in his voice

Name:Blake WIlliamsonAge:17Looks: colour purple, soft music, romance, romance novels, things related to tech, smart people, people who talk book, walks on the beach, swimming and cakeDislikes: Ice Cream, A-holes, people who hate on gays, Flaws/phobias: She has freckles scattered about her face and body, slow thinking, deeply passionate about everything. Bathophobia, numerophobia, TaphophobiaBackground: She came from a middle class family, going to a public school. She was raised on exactly what she needed and always had money. It was never a problem. She was raised happy and polite. Extra: She doesn’t play an instrument, and is a little gay.

Name:Jade AlgomaAge:16Looks:http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/shadowsinthesandbox/images/d/dd/Sweet_Emily_Rudd.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20140117031913Likes: reading, having select friends, listening to music, working at the coffee shop on the corner, learning different languages, making people happy, cats and birds. Dislikes: people who are angry, people raising their voice to her, putting a hand up, answering questions, public speakingflaws/phobias:She is a keep self, she doesn’t like people, she has anxietyOmbrophobia, apiphobia, globophobiaBackground: She was raised in a household with parents who were always fighting and eventually divorced. She likes to be quiet, and she is very shy due to the way she was left alone for so many hours a night. Extra: She has her ears and nose pierced.