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If you have clothes that you can draw on were those clothes and draw the butterflys on them.                                                            OR. You can draw them on a post-it note an stick it on your skin. (:   Good luck quiting. message me if you want :)

what does?

What I'm finding is that only replies to the actual poem/initial thread-starter work properly, replies to comments on it mess up

i have to agree depends on the mood i am in like if i am happy it will be light but if i amsad its dark ! but i still love writing !:)

i feel the same i just created a group but its for a good cause to stop bullying i am 15 years old and writing help sme a lot when im sad or happy or in love !but still ok ill put my writing hope you like it too

what "trigger words" we use and respect...one for some or all...ty for not requiring that one....albeit that the meaning can be so many, different things to so many....

LOL...Well now that's honesty for you...LOL. Oh the picture please the picture...LOL. Howcome you didn't put a face with the rump cause we don't believe it your bottom you chose to place with your writing. However you did the poem justice with it...LOL. Well done my dear you had me laughing my butt off with the ending.

What kind of group project? :)

What work of yours would you like reviewed. I've got one piece only beacause i'm new and have only just started writing again.
mine is "In The Hundt" i'd like it reviewed if you'd be happy to that'd be great as i'll review yours.

I'm really glad you guys decided to join!  Remember to check back on the forum here and the new writing, because I'm going to try and post stuff frequently. 

Please don't make the 1st cut. After you do it changes who you are. Trust me :/                                                               & Everyone is beautiful!!! As tacky as it sounds. (:   You seem so strong from your writing Ive read.,Say strong, stay you. <3 ---madison.

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