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I will take the third if that's ok? this will be a fun experiment good idea

May I take sixth?

Is Chapter 8 avaliable?  I'd happily do it.

Yes, I'll send out a message to everyone in the group once I post a new chapter and mention the name of the person who's set to do the next chapter. So you will be notified. :)

Yes, I'll send out a message to everyone in the group once I post a new chapter and mention the name of the person who's set to do the next chapter. So you will be notified. :)

Gathering steam before this great climb
I will become this hurdles Master
Striking all thoughts and labels that bind my soul
The path illuminated with every step
By the light that shines within each of us 

What can be said of a master? This poem is so vivid the word pictures painted here leap out, dance with life.  I can heare the music, I can feel the rythem. I really can't say why perhaps it is the mention of a guitar but I see a festia a Spanish festia. that is what this poem brought to mind.  I once wrote a story for a very close and dear friend of mine set in the early 19th century west of North America this poem brought that story to mind.

It's been deleted... :(

I am the moderator x)

My hobbies would definitely be cooking, playing on the computer, playing wii, designing random things etc. Not many, but I enjoy all of them :)

You have already done a lot by contributing your writing... excellent work

This is actually our group my friend... I've just planted a seed and will do what I can to help it grow, and hope you will all do the same. I'd like to feel like we all joined here to do something a little different... all suggestions are welcome. 

It sounds like a good story line, but be very weary about spelling and grammar mistakes on books.

I'll get started immediatly. Thanks.

That exactly what I mean.

Totally love Bleach 1# and vampire knoight, naruto, and just got into death note. Also Black bird(not totally appropait)

I just turned 13 about two weeks ago but I'm still commenting (I hope you don't mind). I'm also a good writer at least that's what everyone tells me. I love it when people give me constructive criticism and not just say it's great because I would like improve my writing. I just joined this site about an hour ago and I'm posting a few of my stories. It would be awesome of people tell me what they think.     

ha ha that's hilarious! That prob is the funniest thing i've ever heard. Can I steal that and put you in one of my stories? The little girl who runs around yelling "STOP! I have an idea!" ha ha ha... That is so funny. BUt it a good way! :D

ha ha ha! I think that's the funniest thing I've heard all day. That is just so cute I can totally imagine this little girl runing around yelling "STOP! I have an idea!" Oh so hilarious. But in a good way! ;}

Dragon slain,
Vile creature,
Pillaging our home.

Family lying dead
Torn to bloody shreds
In the rubble of destruction.

Senseless slaughter,
Unreasoning winged monster,
Murdering and razing.

Vengeance has been mine.
Hunted down, to its bower,
Slain without mercy.

As it has shown none,
So have I.
Vengeance sought and found.

Exhaustion, grief, pain,
Now mine,
Tell me I have lived this horror.

But going on?
Inconceivable,
Grief unreliquished.

Sinking to my knees,
Praying to that God,
Begging final peace.

No answer given.
Only the quiet sound,
Of one spared.

Calling for help,
Beneath debris,
Safely sheltered.

Tis my own,
My child,
My reason.