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Paul	My Next Life Experience Chapter: A Juvie Homeschool Mentality Christmas! 6 Years Ago Documentation 12/1/17 12:04 PM U.S. CST A Writer's Cafe "Kiddie Hill Cadette's Group" Forum Entry "My Next Life Experience Chapter: A Juvie Homeschool Mentality Christmas!" by PB Jacobs (www.writerscafe.org), Group Founder/Leader This, in my opinion, will solve many a problem for Honest World Citizen's. One problem in particular, Antisocial Stratification, will really be solved! PB Jacobs
Theodore Lee	I just joined 6 Years Ago I am new to both this group and sharing my writing in the first place. I would appreciate any and all feedback when it come to how I'm writing. I look forward to getting to know this group and I can't wait to see what there is here.
mynamehere99	Hi, constructive criticism on this please? 6 Years Ago I don't know if Im posting this in the right place, do redirect me if im not this is autobiographical and yes i know its not finished but didn't want to continue until i have feedback. Earliest memories. When you are far too young to comprehend what is happening to you, a single event, maybe a memory or moment, can stick with you like glue. I had ran it through my head a million times, until I let my mind go foggy and my soul grow black and bitter with hate. Miss Smith, a thin, tall woman with fine shoulder length blonde hair and blue eyes, nothing outwardly strange or sinister about her, she didn't carry a cane or throw us out of windows by our pigtales, she didn't cackle like a witch or beat us until we we're bruised, she was, by all accounts, ordinardy, and I think that is the scariest part. I raise my hand, confused by a work task she had set us previously. "Miss, I dont understand" I say impatiently, hand still in the air, now waving frantically to try and get her attention. She locks eyes with me across the room, her face is emotionless and cold, I drop my hand, hoping she will come over now she has seen me. She didn't, instead she walks other to another child and asks them if they need any help. If you were to ask me today why she did not help me, I could not tell you, nor could I tell you why the events that followed have left me so deeply troubled and plauged my mind for so long. As the lesson began to draw to a close, she asked us, or I suppose she rather told us, to sit on the carpet in a circle because she would be giving out certificates for attendence shortly. I was never a tadry student, yes sometimes I was mischievous and often stubborn, but I was never one to play truant, in fact I took pride in knowing I often had the highest attendence record of those in my class, and so naturally I knew my name would be called as it always was. The pitter patter of tiny childrens feet fills the room as they a scramble to the carpet, every child that is, excpet for me, I dont move a inch, if only out of spite and a sheer bitterness that nobody had helped me with my work. Not a word was said and I sat there in complete silence, arms crossed heavy to my chest and my face screwed into a scowl. She begins to call children up to the front of the class, each name gradually building more and more tention into the room until.. "Maria" she says with slight irritation in her tone.
Mabel	Just joined the group :D 6 Years Ago Hi! So, I joined this group because it sounded like something I can relate to, but I'm not too sure how active it is anymore, as most of the posts I see are from a year or so ago. Can someone respond and update me on this? Thanks.
Mabel	Hi everyone! 6 Years Ago Uh.. hi! If you're reading this and still haven't joined; I really recommend it ;)
Mabel	Hi everyone! 6 Years Ago Uh.. hi! If you're reading this and still haven't joined; I really recommend it ;)
T.L. Ray	reviews 6 Years Ago hey guys just joined this group saw some new writers and figure we could help each other, sound good?
Joshua Haines	Issue 8 of the comic script series Giga is out now and ready to read XD. 6 Years Ago Hi everyone letting you all know that my latest comic script series called Giga has a new issue out today. Hope you enjoy.
Joshua Haines	Issue 8 of the comic script series Giga is out now and ready to read XD. 6 Years Ago Hi everyone letting you all know that my latest comic script series called Giga has a new issue out today. Hope you enjoy.
Joshua Haines	Issue 8 of the comic script series Giga is out now and ready to read XD. 6 Years Ago Hi everyone letting you all know that my latest comic script series called Giga has a new issue out today. Hope you enjoy.

Joshua Haines	Issue 8 of the comic script series Giga is out now and ready to read XD. 6 Years Ago Hi everyone letting you all know that my latest comic script series called Giga has a new issue out today. Hope you enjoy.
Joshua Haines	Issue 8 of the comic script series Giga is out now and ready to read XD. 6 Years Ago Hi everyone letting you all know that my latest comic script series called Giga has a new issue out today. Hope you enjoy.
Joshua Haines	Issue 8 of the comic script series Giga is out now and ready to read XD. 6 Years Ago Hi everyone letting you all know that my latest comic script series called Giga has a new issue out today. Hope you enjoy.
Joshua Haines	Issue 8 of the comic script series Giga is out now and ready to read XD. 6 Years Ago Hi everyone letting you all know that my latest comic script series called Giga has a new issue out today. Hope you enjoy.
Joshua Haines	Issue 8 of the comic script series Giga is out now and ready to read XD. 6 Years Ago Hi everyone letting you all know that my latest comic script series called Giga has a new issue out today. Hope you enjoy.
Joshua Haines	Issue 8 of the comic script series Giga is out now and ready to read XD. 6 Years Ago Hi everyone letting you all know that my latest comic script series called Giga has a new issue out today. Hope you enjoy.
Joshua Haines	Issue 8 of the comic script series Giga is out now and ready to read XD. 6 Years Ago Hi everyone letting you all know that my latest comic script series called Giga has a new issue out today. Hope you enjoy.
Joshua Haines	Issue 8 of the comic script series Giga is out now and ready to read XD. 6 Years Ago Hi everyone letting you all know that my latest comic script series called Giga has a new issue out today. Hope you enjoy.
Joshua Haines	Issue 8 of the comic script series Giga is out now and ready to read XD. 6 Years Ago Hi everyone letting you all know that my latest comic script series called Giga has a new issue out today. Hope you enjoy.
Joshua Haines	Issue 8 of the comic script series Giga is out now and ready to read XD. 6 Years Ago Hi everyone letting you all know that my latest comic script series called Giga has a new issue out today. Hope you enjoy.