100 % Review Forum New writer going through an ex..

I've lost all confidence in what I'm writing.  I'd love someone to read it and review it. And be honest.  I'm the woman who really does want to know if my a*s looks fat in those jeans.  It's the first half of the first chapter of a novella.  I think about 1500 words but I forget.  Fair warning, there is swearing.  My main male MC likes to cuss, even if I don't.  Pesky character has free will.  Thanks.