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Hi everyone! I'm new to the site, and still learning how this all works. I've posted the first chapter of my book, and am interested in having it looked at. I'd be happy to exchange critiques with someone. I'm looking for honest educated evaluations, not just opinions, though those are also welcome! I'm planning to upload more chapters as I get the previous ones done based on feedback.

Hi Will I'd be glad to exchange critiques with. I'm new too and have also uploaded a few paragraphs. I'll try and work out how this works... N