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  Hello, I have been perfecting this new story, its a science fiction novel. I have written it in the present tense, even though I know I'm at a disadvantage, considering the lack of action in this part 01 of the prologue and we can all agree that the present tense is more effective when the flow of the story is more intense. My objective of writing this in the present tense was to make the introduction stand out, I think it conveyed the reality of what it feels like to be captured, the anxiety and helplessness of that situation.

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