100 % Review Forum Bonds of Coal and Diamond - re..

Hi, I'm new here.

I'd like for a review of my 1st chapter, but it's too long to post here. I've posted it in the group, so if anyone is kind enough to give some feedback.

It's a Science Fiction aimed at young adults.

Book title: Bonds of Coal and Diamond
Chapter title: Out-zoned

Thanks,
Shad