100 % Review Forum OCEAN

Ocean so pretty, clear and blue
Ocean for miles over I flew
Ocean creatures roaming free
Wonder what it would be like to live under the see
Colors so vivid and bright
Thousands of fish swimming around
They do not make a sound
Ocean so calm and peaceful such a beautiful site
Waves crashing on the beach at night
Ocean so pretty, clear and blue
Breezes blowing softly baby turtles make their debut
Ocean so large you cover the world
Ocean so pretty

"Wonder what it would be like to live under the see" should be "sea"
"Ocean so calm and peaceful such a beautiful site" should be "sight" - also maybe need a comma between "peaceful" and "such"
"Breezes blowing softly baby turtles make their debut" needs a comma between "softly" and "baby"

Overall, I think the poem could use a more narrow view of the theme, or it needs to be longer to really make the impact you're looking for.