100 % Review Forum Hello there!

I am new to this group and just added a book called "Phases of the Storm."  There are only three chapters and a prologue at this point, but I was hoping to get some thoughts on it!  It could be some constructive criticism or it could be a simple "I like it," anything will make my day!  Smiles always grace my face when I get a notification!  I would love to continue with this story but I want to improve as I do so.

 

If you'd be so kind as to leave me a review, I will make sure to look at some of your work! Have a beautiful day!