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Liz and Hannah

In need of some constructive critiques!! :) 10 Years Ago Hi! We're co-authors named Elizabeth and Hannah, and we're in need of some more critical feedback on the prologue of our contemporary fantasy novel. Here's some information on it: The Princess and the Guardian Book I: A Royal Reborn Dazzling and elegant, young Princess Andria had become the shining star to the People of a kingdom in the sky. Yet as she grew and became engaged to a foreign prince despite her deep dislike for him, she runs away - exchanging her regal life as a royal, for a humbler life on a farm in modern-day Roseburg, Oregon. Now after five years of her absence, her Guardian Xavier has found her and remains determined to bring her home after years of facing shame and banishment for failing to keep her from jumping from the Realm's island in the sky. If you're interested, click on the cover below to read A Royal Reborn! All constructive feedback is welcome! Thank you in advance for all of your help!