100 % Review Forum Free proofread, anyone?

Greetings, all! I’m Loregon, and I am a freelance proofreader. I am in the process of expanding my resume and would like to add nonfiction to my experience. I will proofread a chapter of anything you are currently writing at no charge.   Materials should be no shorter than ten pages and no longer than thirty pages. I will return pages to you with corrections within 72 hours. I can indicate corrections either on Microsoft Word using the Track Changes feature or on a hard copy.   In exchange, I ask that you allow me to add your name and the title of your work to my resume. I will not plagiarize your work or share it with anyone else.   Deal?

Hello, my name is Kristina and I am a new writer.  I was wondering if you would like to proofread an article I recently wrote.  I submitted it to constant content but it was rejected.  The editors said it needed more commas, and that I needed to pay special attention to subordinate phrases.  I've looked over my article but I can't figure out where they want the commas.  I'm not even sure if I fully understand what  subordinate phrase is.  Any help that you could give would be greatly appreciated.