100 % Review Forum Feedback on my story

Hi there! I just started a story on Watt Pad and would love some feedback. It would be even better if you could leave a comment right on Watt Pad because then everything is in one place, but if it is easier for you to leave your feedback on this thread, then that's totally fine too! I just want to know how I'm doing and if you like the plot and just some feedback. Thank you.