100 % Review Forum need some constructive critici..

"The year is 2145. 100 years have passed since a deadly virus spread throughout the world, destroying everything its path. Everyone is born with it, and at age 25 the virus consumes you. It turns you into a mindless husk of a person. Being alone in this world for so long has left me devoid of all emotion. I feel nothing. My name is Aria Daniels and this is my story" That is my summary. I'm just writing this for fun but i would love some feedback! I will return the favor(: 

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no your review was exactly what i need(: Thank you! I'll be reading your stuff shortly!

I feel a story like this would need extremely creative small details to make it something people haven't read before. We've had a lot of "I am Legend" type deals, people living in a world destroyed, and zombie apocalypse stories; which it seems to be a trend. Definitely not saying you shouldn't do it, but in my opinion you would need some sort of side hook to keep readers reading. Love story, personal monologue, something provocative, etc.