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I am looking for a few people to review my first attempt at a novel. I can't post it here, but will be willing to send it to emails. It's called: The Chronicles of Erika Lorenz: A Beast Within. It's the first in a four part series that details the struggles of being infected with a disease the public nicknames "Vampirism." These are not the normal vampires we all know, but diseased people with more illness than benefit. The first book introduces Bill, an IT administrator with the Vasquez Corporation who finds himself on the run from the police after becoming the first infected in over a decade. While on the run, Bill makes a live or death decision and decides to save Erika from a rapist. This starts a series of events that will change both of them forever and reveal a secret about Bill that could change the future forever.