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Just an idea, let me know if I should go for it.

11 Years Ago


Just an intro..

When memebers of a motorcycle club meet at their club for a Fourth of July party, they don't think of the worst. There are drinks all around, and everyone is having a good time. Although, when the buzzer goes off to inform them that someone is coming, no one sees anything. Little do they know, that they didn't look long enough to see a visitor that wasn't invited.....
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Re: Just an idea, let me know if I should go for it.

11 Years Ago


you should definitely continue this story. in that one paragraph there is an air of mystery and foreboding. sounds like the making of a great plot.