100 % Review Forum Reviews please?

I've been working on a collection of short stories and a novel about a NYPD detective, James Finnegan, whose unique situation crosses over to a new world that's definitely not New York. Three are uploaded right now: "Fear Her," "The King's Game," and "Your Most Deadly Desires"
I would really appreciate some feedback. I will, of course, return the favour. Thank you so much for your time!