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So Hello, and how's everyone doing? Would anyone mind reviewing my story Don't Stop? Oh and I'd love to review any of your stories :)

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I enjoyed reading your prolog and look forward to seeing chapter one. I'd greatly appreciate it if you could read the beginnings of chapters 1 & 3 of Oogie: a casualty of the Sexual Revolution and tell me which would be better to start the book. Chapters 1 & 2 can be moved to later in the book for George to recall when Oogie brings him back into her life. Everything else would still be in chronological order. Thanks, George