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Hi, my names Ashley, or Clutz if you want. I've been on writers for a few years now and have gotten great review on my poetry and some of my stories but never any feedback on books. I would love some feedback on a new project I'm working on and of course I'll review as much as I can. I read pretty much everything, books take me a bit longer but I'll always try to review at least a couple chapters.    My book is called "Saturday on Fire" if you're interested & here's a link: it's rated mature for most chapters.