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Good evening all,

I am looking for some advice and critique as I am new to writing full pieces. I have written many things over the years however, I have never asked for the opinion of others as I have never felt good enough.  Recently I have really picked up my passion for reading and writing again and thought, what the heck, to write is in my blood and I love it!

Please, please, review my first chapter of the novel I have started. I would love to hear some honest reviews. If you liked it, thank you, if you didn't, please help me improve.

I would love to be able to help others and share my opinion. Please let me know if you wish me to review your work for you.

Thank you very much for taking the time to help.