100 % Review Forum Just Joined, hoping for some f..

Hey Yall! I used to be a member of a different writing site, but the reviews just didn't come like I thought they would. I love to read, and post what I think about readings so I am hoping this is the site for me. anyways, I was hoping to get some feedback on my story Sincerely Mallory. It starts out a little slow, so I understand if you think the same as I do about it in the beginning, but it was hard to get her point of view without it. I hope you enjoy it! This book means alot to me. I have WAYYY more chapters on my computer, but I didn't think I should post them all at once.