100 % Review : Forum : Post here if you want your sho..


[send message][befriend] Subscribe
Mia
[reply] [quote]

Post here if you want your short story reviewed :)

12 Years Ago


I'm not claiming to be an expert, but I will give my honest views. It may take a while to get through everything, so please be patient with me. I promise I will review your story if you ask:)
[send message][befriend] Subscribe
TLK
[reply] [quote]

Re: Post here if you want your short story reviewed :)

12 Years Ago


Thank you for offering your time, Mia, that's very good-hearted of you.

I wouldn't mind more readers enjoying this: Valentina and the Village Listener (link).  It's a romantic story based on my enjoyment of Russian folk tales.  It's two thousand words long, so that puts people off somewhat.  It's easier to read a short poem.

If you have something you feel needs readers too, I would be honoured to reciprocate the favour.  Send me a PM and I'll get to it ASAP.
[reply] [quote]

Re: Post here if you want your short story reviewed :)

12 Years Ago


thanx for offering!!! your so nice!  I'd really like if you reviewed some of mine.
[send message][befriend] Subscribe
Mia
[reply] [quote]

Re: Post here if you want your short story reviewed :)

12 Years Ago


Please would you rather message me requests. I don't get notified when people post here...so I would get your requests faster if you send me a message :)
[reply] [quote]

Re: Post here if you want your short story reviewed :)

12 Years Ago


Would you review the first 3 chapters of my book Kaine and Grae?  I would appreciate any feedback.  It is my first draft so there will be heavy editing done.  I am mostly concerned with whether the story and characters are engaging.  Any coments on characters, story flow, etc. are greatly appreciated.
[reply] [quote]

Re: Post here if you want your short story reviewed :)

12 Years Ago


Can you please review mine?

[reply] [quote]

Re: Post here if you want your short story reviewed :)

12 Years Ago


I'd love a review on Flame(second draft)
[reply] [quote]

Re: Post here if you want your short story reviewed :)

12 Years Ago


I wouldn't mind if you guys could take a glimps of my story: 
Hope you like it xD. Both positive and negative reviews are welcome.
[reply] [quote]

Re: Post here if you want your short story reviewed :)

12 Years Ago


I would like a review for my story titled The Heresy, all is welcome thank you!
[reply] [quote]

Re: Post here if you want your short story reviewed :)

12 Years Ago


I would be grateful if you would look at my one-page biography of a woman struggling with family, war, and money. It's called "Nickels & Dimes."
[send message][befriend] Subscribe
Sid
[reply] [quote]

Re: Post here if you want your short story reviewed :)

12 Years Ago


Thanks a lot for the offer! I would really like a review of my short story Moonless Sky.
[reply] [quote]

Re: Post here if you want your short story reviewed :)

12 Years Ago


hello I'm new and I cant believe I have found someone like you here. 

Please review my first chapter when you can. I welcome all comments, from grammar to characters and plot. You are no creature, sweetheart... 
[reply] [quote]

Re: Post here if you want your short story reviewed :)

12 Years Ago


Hey everyone, My short story, We Are Not Winds, is lying on my profile patiently asking for you to read it, to review it. If you review mine, I shall return the favor. All are welcome!   as the snake in Harry Potter and The Sorcerer's Stone would like to say,   thanksssssssssssssssss
[reply] [quote]

Re: Post here if you want your short story reviewed :)

12 Years Ago


Hey there! Would you mind reviewing my first chapter? For everyone that gives feedback, I'll be sure to return the favor!
[reply] [quote]

Re: Post here if you want your short story reviewed :)

12 Years Ago


Thanks for offering. Would you read mine if you get the chance?
[reply] [quote]

Re: Post here if you want your short story reviewed :)

12 Years Ago


What is this?

I joined here since Writers Digest is closing... but now it looks like Ill have to move along.
[reply] [quote]

Re: Post here if you want your short story reviewed :)

12 Years Ago


What is this?

I joined here since WD is closing its community.

This is not good.

"Aresta Enterprise does not claim ownership of Content you submit or make available for inclusion on the Service. However, with respect to Content you submit or make available for via the Service, you grant Aresta Enterprise a perpetual, irrevocable, world-wide, royalty free and non-exclusive license to use, distribute, reproduce, modify and publicly display such Content on the Service." 
[reply] [quote]

Re: Post here if you want your short story reviewed :)

12 Years Ago


would love to be reviewed :)
[reply] [quote]

Re: Post here if you want your short story reviewed :)

12 Years Ago


Are you still reading short stories? If you read my story, Apparition, I'd be so grateful!
[reply] [quote]

Re: Post here if you want your short story reviewed :)

12 Years Ago



First Page first
Previous Page prev
1