100 % Review Forum Your reviews please?

Hi, I'm pretty new and have recently added my first chapter of my fantasy novel "The Unsullied Child".  It is here: is only my first draft and first stab at writing a story I've got laid out in my mid so I'm very much open to all constructive criticism.   Reviews don't seem to easy to get so any will be greatly received and, of course, reciprocated. ThanksJason