Am a genius
Misunderstood in every
aspect
One that can only relate to what i write
And not all that i
read.
for when i talk
Its like ' Greek' to some
Gibberish to
most
And for the rest
Who cares.
A genius indeed
My ideas on
life are like a comic
Taken in for a while
But not easy to
comprehend
Scoft at for being unenforceable
And frowned on for being
Ideal
Perplexing for the few
And for those who get them
not in a
century will that happen
is their constant say...
Now am locked away
in ' my lab'
Not a science lab
But a thinker's sanctuary
to invent,
discover and write
My ideas, your dark thoughts,
his macho tactics and
her selflsh whims
All in one
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Re: Post here if you'd like a review!11 Years AgoThe African Trinkets
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Re: Post here if you'd like a review!11 Years AgoI am new to this site, first time bringing out any of my work for people to see. A review would be nice thanks.
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Re: Post here if you'd like a review!11 Years AgoA review would be great! And I will be happy to return the favor :)
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Re: Post here if you'd like a review!11 Years AgoHere are a few things I've posted, I would love a rating or review.
My published novel, Sins of The Fetus Man, is an experimental piece built and written from a schizophrenic mind. It's a stream of thought novel with no punctuation, written word for word exactly how I intended. I agree, that there are some terrible parts and places that make no sense. But with an entire read through the story comes full circle and not only the reasoning behind the way it was written, but the story itself comes to a clarity, as well as the purpose of what the novel stands for. Within it's writing are experiences that a mind labeled Schizophrenic has genuinely believed to have lived through. A look into what the masses call madness or a viewing of my normal and the way I have to live day by day. |
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chance to get money for your work11 Years AgoIf anyone has BOOKS they want to sell on thepitstop33.com, email [email protected] to settle it all. Books of poetry, pictures, or simply writings are all welcome. It's a great chance to expose yourself to the world.
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Re: Post here if you'd like a review!11 Years AgoHello all, I'm new here, so a review on any of my poems would be more than appreciated! Thanks much, Mark |
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Re: Post here if you'd like a review!11 Years Agoany advice or thoughts would be much appreciated (: |
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Re: Post here if you'd like a review!11 Years AgoReview this short first page of my novel The Wizard Table
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Re: Post here if you'd like a review!11 Years AgoReview this experiment :D
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Re: Post here if you'd like a review!11 Years Agosomething I wrote that makes my head hurt. Would love some feedback/opinions on absolutely anything? :D |
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Re: Post here if you'd like a review!11 Years AgoAny review would be nice
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Re: Post here if you'd like a review!11 Years AgoIt would mean So much to mean if you could review my work, I would, of course, return the favor!!!
And might I add I would be ever grateful!!!
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Re: Post here if you'd like a review!11 Years AgoHi my names Sara, could you review the first two chapters of The Wizard Table or Sleeping Planet: Escape from Superstition. Thanks!
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Re: Post here if you'd like a review!11 Years AgoI would like some reviews. I don't have many pieces posted because today is my first day on the site. I'm getting a feel for things & the people, I'll most likely be staying though. All reviews I receive I will return, the more thorough the better. I don't find reviews such as, "this is a really beautiful poem, keep it up" to be very helpful, although they're still appreciated.
Thanks in advance to anyone who takes the time out and reads some of my work!! |
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Re: Post here if you'd like a review!11 Years AgoI've finished the first two chapters of a novel I'm working on, Tell City. I'd like to know how its looking to readers so far, so that I may continue forward with some readers' advice in mind.
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Re: Post here if you'd like a review!11 Years AgoYet to receive a single review :(
Would be lovely if you could have a look and give me some thoughts;- Will. |