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please review some of my poems if anyone gets the chance thank you

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What Smeels Have to SayWhat Smeels Have to Say A Poem by stephen dillon
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Composition grapes smashed together into wine drunk from a chalice, texture, and smell, while the swiller of satire has the future seen through a keyhole, drunkenly distorted haze made abstract by thoughts from "other mind”, the one that stumbles forward onto cobblestone kneecaps. Down River, down Broughton learning from my city what smells have to say and what jazz corner hustler is selling his fix for, maybe nothing but a wolfish grin with teeth dripping in American dollars, have no fear you learned bravery with your craft, garbage disposal logic got you on bus, train, plane where you appear in a poof of light on stage in reading houses, cafe’s, and auditoriums.
When particals of your rock n roll language caught on you've made it big,proud?happy?
Not quite until you have toppled idols and muted genius.
Just remember dig until you have got pay dirt and even then wash away livings veil of refuge to publish gold from the mud in which you are made and from which you are named
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desperately need reviews

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thin lips A Poem by stephen dillon
" i though i'd poke some fun at the writers who overload their work with images for the sake of sounding smart "
“Thin Lips”Fundamentally overdeveloped phonetics systematically scrohnized into blizzards of syntax, compiled into contrary concerto’s manifested through visions of symbiotic symbolism without concern for mangled legs of literary lions growling at pathetic paramours promoting the neglectful negation of nonsense nouns serving the singular purpose of flexing the musical muscle , expelling this English escape artist from his own crowded classroom, high below the afore mentioned afterbirth apocalypse spilling out and up the spiral spine of regurgitating readers remaking and renaming but never renewing always hiccup and ha’chewing snot nosed manifesto pre chewed gum post chewing.
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I would like a review on any of my works. I need to know how I did. Thanks!
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Originally posted by poetry-kiddo
You might have been my dudette You might have been my dudetteA Poem by poetry-kiddo
You might have  been my Dudette!!

You might`ve been my Dudette!!

If I was a lil' younger...and a lil, full of anger,
I might have been kinda rude...to your ex-boyfriend Jude.

I might have been your date, if Jude brought the flowers late,
And You would have been my Dudette and I might have been your Dude!!

You might have tried to fling your shoe at me in frustration,
I might have caught it in mid-air,worn it round my neck-tie....
Called it high-street fashion!

You might have watched a spicy-dicey movie,
With me crunching vanilla  pop-corn, at the open air big drive-in .....
From dusk to early dawn!

Jude might have fumed and fretted... but he never could do Judo,
It helps to learn your martial-arts my babe,
Please forgive this poetry-kiddo!
 
P.S Who said its a cardinal sin to admire another Judes'  woman?
Lady Ga-ga goes ga-ga over Judas and Im but just another human.

© 2011 poetry-kiddo

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"winter time in the minds eye"Passion pitches a fastball right across homeplate so fastlike a striking match,and you can't even swing at it.But just like a shooting star in the night it flies right byas I make a wish,that for just once fame and fortune matter nothing to me.All i should care for is my evaporating energy of butkiss.Nowhere is homei everyone is focused on feverishly prioritizedpoints of intrest.Phantom photos grouped together like ideas pielingup like dead leaves in my mind, line by line I record my impotence, my failures,and the always escaping images never to be.
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sooooo good i freaking loved it 
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"cinderblock""cinderblock" A Poem by stephen dillon
" angry,frustrated,dark,humor "
Slamming fists of frutration onto the cold cement walls of my mind, cracking from every angle and chipping apart at random.Drunk with emotion i fight agaist myself,evreychance I get tobreak my own legs I jump from rooftops into femur cracking landingstips.
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RE: 2nd Amendment

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You bear your arms
but leave your heart,
Perfect your weapons
but destroy your art
Hold your gun high 
but not your head
We can't live together
if everybody's dead


***please review***
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If anyone wants a review of a STORY send me a message, I'm not as strong in the poem department.

I tend to take a critical look at things like an editor would, so it won't be the kind of review that just gushes over how good or bad it is, although if it's really good I'll be sure to mention it :)
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Just joined, brand new - please go easy! hee hee
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Hi everyone, I am new to this website.
I promise to check out recent posts asking for reviews when I have more time. I am in the middle of moving right now, so free time is limited.

I just wrote this (loosely) fictional memoir. I would like as much criticism as possible as I am a young writer and looking to improve my writing skills.
I appreciate it very much.

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please lemme get some rvizzels please
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REALITY BYTES by missy chrissy

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the sky is a painted azure desert...Earth...a Divine Oasis...in a universe of mystery and wonderment...Souls' Paradise... by missy chrissy 2013 
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New to everything, any kind of feedback will be worth its weight (length) in gold.
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I'd love for some reviews....
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I would simply adore you if you took the time to send a review my way! Thanks!
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I would love to see your reviews , you are my motive :)
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Tell Me Your Sign
about an hour ago
So tell me...Whats your sign..You tell me yours..I'll tell you mine.. We could be lovers,,We could be friends..Guess we just won't know..Till the story ends.. You give me you heart.Maybe I'll  give you mine..We'll join paths together,,In this life so divine.. Must of been destiny..Why we joined paths..All I know is I hope..Whatever we've got lasts,...
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please review me i eally ned some feed back