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Re: Post here if you'd like a review!

12 Years Ago


Um I'm new at this so I don't exactly know what I'm posting for and how I even post but here's a post I guess I need some reviews on my boyfriends work cause he thinks its stupid so yeah thanks if u do review and ill try my best to review u all to:)
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12 Years Ago


If you could review my book, that would be great. :) I'll take any advice you will give me.
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11 Years Ago


I'd really like it if someone could review my poetry. Just send me read requests and i'll review whatever you like too.


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11 Years Ago


Would love if someone could review this.



I write just for fun, but would love to improve. Feel free to review some other of my writings, but note that a few of them are drafts.
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11 Years Ago


If people could review some of the stuff that I've written, that would be much appreciated. Thank you!
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11 Years Ago


Oh oh oh! Me me me! I would love to get a review on my book, Midnight Sun. It's on-going and ....yeah...I pretty much need some pointers.
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Re: Post here if you'd like a review!

11 Years Ago


A review for a review?

It'd be nice to get a few opinions on my pieces. In return, i'll do the same. By sending me a reading request, that'll guarantee that you will get a review back as soon as possible. 

I'd like to improve on my writing if possible.

Thanks in advance!  
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11 Years Ago


HEY GUYS, I JUST PUT UP A NEW STORY WOULD LOVE SOME FEEDBACK ON IT, I HAVE OTHER ITEMS ON MY PAGE AS WELL IF YOU LIKE MY WRITING READ AWAY, LOOK FOWARD TO YOU STOPPING BY!   WRITING IS LOVE!
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Re: Post here if you'd like a review!

11 Years Ago


Hey

Could you read my story please? 


Please tell me what you think of it! Thanks :)
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11 Years Ago


Could people look at my new story, Cruise?

Thanks!
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11 Years Ago


I would totally love it if you reviewed me!
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11 Years Ago


PLEASE STOP BY AND CHECK OUT A PIECE WOULD LOVE TO HEAR FROM YALL
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11 Years Ago


It'd be appreciated if anyone took a look at any of my writings that are up, and gave them any sort of review ^^.
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11 Years Ago


I would like a review on the story i'm writing just to see what others think and whether I should continue...

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11 Years Ago



I've just started here and i'm nervous about the whole uploading your writing, so it would mean a lot if people could check my first chapter out of I Grant You A Wish, thanks :) 
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11 Years Ago




Rookie here, I want to learn from everyone, so any tips and pointers would do me good, thank you :D...I'll happily return the favor.
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11 Years Ago


please read my stuff and tell me if i need to make any changes>.<
thanks!(:
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11 Years Ago


Hey! Please read my story! 
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11 Years Ago


Hey, I'd like a review on my poem:)  Thank you!
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You might have been

11 Years Ago


You might have been my dudette You might have been my dudetteA Poem by poetry-kiddo
" Dreams are all we have got and fanciful desires manifest aplenty, You got your own world, and I got mine sugar, so much for sentimenty, If Jude would take a hike on Mars now, we'd be so romantic! "
You might have  been my Dudette!!

You might`ve been my Dudette!!

If I was a lil' younger...and a lil, full of anger,
I might have been kinda rude...to your ex-boyfriend Jude.

I might have been your date, if Jude brought the flowers late,
And You would have been my Dudette and I might have been your Dude!!

You might have tried to fling your shoe at me in frustration,
I might have caught it in mid-air,worn it round my neck-tie....
Called it high-street fashion!

You might have watched a spicy-dicey movie,
With me crunching vanilla  pop-corn, at the open air big drive-in .....
From dusk to early dawn!

Jude might have fumed and fretted... but he never could do Judo,
It helps to learn your martial-arts my babe,
Please forgive this poetry-kiddo!
 
P.S Who said its a cardinal sin to admire another Judes'  woman?
Lady Ga-ga goes ga-ga over Judas and Im but just another human.

© 2011 poetry-kiddo

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