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I'm new here so any advice would be really appreciated!
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Hi! I would love for you to check out my work and I will definitely review one of your works :)
Renee
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Greetings!
Looking for some reviews on my short essay The Voice of Question. Give me some feedback and I'll return the favor!
-Quexycyclops 
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A few new ones from the website

A Dream Shared Unknowingly Each Year New Flowers Bloom Bringing In the Wasted Harvest Pope Francis – A New Tsar at the Vatican Now Is the Time Walking in Autumn in Banagher Three Men Look Upon A Horse They Went Over
and a few poetry videos...
The Woman Behind the Veil — The Islamic Burqua Debate A Horse Is a Horse A Postcard to Her Father Sent Fall of the Germans of Vrsac Poetic Musings on the Hamely Tang A Rose Is Still a Rose When Not in Bloom – Poem on Forgiveness Theme Modern Venus Reflections on Freedom Cata – Monster of the River Shannon The Death of Erskine Childers Laziness is a Virtue We Are All Spectators on Another Greek Tragedy – Dimitris Christoulas R.I.P. Out of Tune The Real Americans Maud Gonne – Yeats’ Muse
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I would love a review on my first 2 chapters when you get time! :) i'll return the favor as well! :)

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Hello! Im new and was wondering if anyone would review my newest poem 'Emptiness' I shall return the favour!
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Review a few of mine? THANKS!!!!
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Hey, I'm 15.. Joined the cafe just yesterday. Do let me know what you think about my work. you're free to criticise!
Thankyou!
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Hi! I'm new here so I'd really appreciate a review :) I'll return! Thank you
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Hello there, I'm Marzarret and I'm new to the group. I'm currently writing a novel entitled "The Light Beyond."

If you have time to spare to peek on my work, I will deeply appreciate it.
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HI there! I'm just new here, but I'd really like to have some feedback on any story that I have written so far. I'll do the same ;) Thanks!
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I would definitely appreciate a review, it all matters!
Thanks!
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College life is our truly free life,
Free of responsibilities, free of
dependencies;
Talk as u want to, walk as u want to
Dance when you want to, sing if u have to;
No one cares what you do
Mistakes & crazinesses are glorified too
Do the outrageous, b a freak,
Dont even wash urself, who cares if u reek.
O how awesome is college life
How amazing the friends here
Bunking classes, teasing teachers
who cares about advices, who needs their
lectures?
Meaningless blabberings, reasonless
laughs,
Try acting clever and u r gonna commit
gaffes.
"I will study tomorrow", "I will study
tomorrow"
That is our daily resolution, our college life
motto
Lol we all know how strong that resolution
is
No studying until exam eve, no not even a
word
Study any other day and you are a nerd
Fail an exam, friends will pat ur back "u
did it man, HI 5",
Top an exam and hear the screams
"BETRAYAL CHEAT TRAITOR!!"
Forget ur ID card one day, golden
opportunity to walk kilometres for it,
Listen properly for 5 mins in class, and ur
head is fighting gravity...zzzzz
O yaaay college life is awesome life
There is nothing better, nothing superer,
4 pencils, 3 compasses for 10 ppl,
sometimes for 20 or 30,
T-shirts jeans shoes have become
common property
Take out ur wallet near a bakery ---->
STAMPEEEEDE!!!
Your uncle's sister-in-law's second cousin
got a job ----> "Buddyyyy Treeeeeeat!!!"
And then there r the rumours, the gossips,
the classroom crushes,
And the never tiring discussion of "who is
the fairest of them all?"
And the weird poses, the attention seeking
clicks,
The FB uploads, followed by the "Like it
mate, and ill like yours".
When things going gr8 our friends r
boisterous they r noisy,
And for troubled times they got comforting
words (kutte, kaminey)
This sums up our college life, the best
phase of our existence
Freedom, friends, fun & frolic
And here u can post a 30 line poem
With no chorus, no rhyme scheme, no
punchline
And still hope for 20, 30, 40 likes
Simply coz the poem is on college life!!!! :-)
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thankyou!
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hi, i'm working on a new story and i would love some reviews! it's called The V Word if you review me I'll review you! :D
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I'd love to get any advice and reviews from anyone. Thanks, I'll be sure to send you some reviews back.
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Intense undertaking, reading from all these posts. Don't mind if I add to it. :D