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Thank you anyone and everyone
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I would like you to review ch.1 of my book. It does not have a name yet  
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Crazy sometimes......excite u to your fullest.....give you a chance to dream the world...makes u dreamy about day and nights......energize u to put your heart and soul into it.....and when u go very close to it,it suddenly disappears.........!!!Because that's what the life all about!U never know, what will happen in your next breath,what will change in your next blink....things will come and things will go,days will come and nights will go,but the life will remain the same.....A Question can not be answered ever!!!
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Short story

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Hey! If you can be bothered, then go ahead and review this fine piece of work:
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Heyy all...Chapters 1-3, This is my first attempt at really writing anything. Would really appreciate any and all feedback good and bad :)

Thanks alot!
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Insanity I sit here in my tiny apartment as I am going slowly insane. I stare out my little window at the sparrow who stares back at me as a hawk, ready to rip out my eyes with its sharpened claws. These thoughts are trapped in my mind; I want badly to escape. I flee to the living room where the television is playing and there’s the psycho clown from IT, reaching out for me. He attempts to pull me through the set with his white mangled hands.  I need to get out of this place, but I am too afraid to step out of my safety zone of this insanity. Walls begin to close in, as I try to catch my breath, and I suddenly see blood seeping through the cracks of the dilapidated ceiling. I close my eyes and I pray for this to please stop as I pull at my hair and scream. A scream that has no voice. The room spins endlessly in my head as I crumble to the floor, and I grasp the matted carpet holding on for dear life. I am a prisoner of this insane asylum in my mind.   This is my first prose poem. I would appreciate all reviews on the poem to let me know if first of all, if it is a prose poem, etc.  Thanks,corky2114 
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I'd love to get a review :) any feedback is welcome!
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Hi,

I'm yet to be a day old at WritersCafe - and I've published this a teeny-weeny fiction with a few hand-drawn comic illustrations :-). Would love to get your feedback on it. Any suggestions would be most welcome.




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I return the reviews:3 
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Hi everyone,

I would appreciate a review if anyone has time.  Of course I will return the favour.
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Well, if you're willing to review all my works, there aren't too many and their short and not-quite-sweet.
If I had to pick I'd ask for you to review Joyous Skin and Rain. I feel like I've slipped in my creativity when I wrote those and critical feedback for them would be MUCH appreciated.
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Brand new and a little nervous ;)  but also looking forward to reading all of yours.
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Complete novice and I need to know if I should give up this hobby.... <smiles>

I'll also read / review other folks stuff as well.  I simply love this concept and I am looking forward to learning from you all.

- Michael
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Prologue and Chapter One please :)
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Originally posted by Meghan Alex
Just post here and I'll review you! Easy as that :)

       #The WARNING

In the chill dark damp of night,
sometimes I go where others might never dare.
Seeking, seeking those things and thoughts which if we could see but clearly,
would lay us so seemingly bare.

Oh how safe we feel wrapped up in our shrouds,
in which we're so tightly bound.
So cosy so muffled, so deathly still, so afraid to move forward,
or hear any life giving sound.

'Tis easier, so much easier, to wear the death mask.
To hide behind this not such an unbelievable task.


Ah but brother and sister listen to me hard,
listen to me now please do?
For the above message holds such chilling meaning for me,
so why not for one such as You?

 
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Can you review mine when you get a chance? Please send me some mail with your story so I can take a look at it too. =] THanks!
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Thank you anyone who gives me thoughts.
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Hello, new here and just posted my first piece of work. It's a short essay classified under poems, which I shall in advance apologize for. Wasn't sure exactly where to put it. Learning how to navigate this site as well, but any feedback you could give me would be appreciated! I'd be sure to return the favor, cheers.
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I recently uploaded some stories and drafts that I have.  I wouldn't mind any sort of reviews and critique, good or bad.  I'd of course prefer it to be constructive.  : )