100 % Review Forum review for review

Hey its honey! im new here and would like some honest and opinionated new friends! please send me a friend's request and read my first story ever written called "Mishaps of Misunderstandings."  Let's play review for review...you chose a title you would like me to read and review and I would do the same....that way we're playing fair and everyones work is noticed and critqued!