100 % Review Forum Review for a weekly Novel?

Hi, I'm new on here and just started publishing my novel, Closer, on tumblr. I wanted to do something different so I decided to put out a reading every Monday. I might switch to a daily installment if the readers demand for it, but as of right now I am just doing weekly. The first part of my novel is up on my page, can I get some input? You can also check out closernovel.tumblr.com and like my facebook page facebook.com/closernovel.