100 % Review Forum New Short Story - Check It Out..

Jaye Aldagene

New Short Story - Check It Out!

13 Years Ago

Hey guys, I just joined & I hope you'll take a couple of minutes to read my short story. It's something I wrote for a class last year that I recently re-discovered & tweaked a bit to publish on this site.

It's one of my first completed pieces so I'm hoping to get some constructive {but positive!} remarks on it.

Thanks!