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Hey! I'm a new writer and I'd love to receive some feedback or critcism on my poems. I don't get a lot of reviews on this site, so I don't really know how I'm doing. Any feedback will be greatly appreciated and I'll return the review. Thank You!!!

Wow, tasteful profile pic.  It made me laugh :D Young writers are so overlooked, aren't we?  I'm fourteen so its a relatable situation. Society loves to apply limits, then backtrack on them when they arent "politically correct" anymore. sorry, enough of my censorshiptirade.  Your poems: The ideas are all really good.  I especially like This isnt mine, i think thats your best piece.  a little rewording is necessary, and one more thing: I love how your love poems are not lovey-dovey crap, they get to the crux of things and show what its really like.  overall, your stuff is really good, so keeping doing what you do! and if someone tells you not to do what you love, ignore (for lack of a more colorful word) them! they arent you and they dont know you, so who cares? (of course, you should listen to me:) could you please read and review my stuff as well? thanks   katie