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this is another new piece that i wrote with the advice from my talented wise friend's advice in mind,i'd really appreciate some feedback as i've never..
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this is the first work i've done in a long while,i tried to apply the advice my very talented newfound friend here in writerscafe gave me so this meth..
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seriously only good thing you'll ever read from me and it's not from me (thus it's magnificence)
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Time laughs at me, as my black hair turns grey,tick-tock, tick-tock, constant mock of the clock,time doesn't wait, never goes away,tick-tock, tick-toc..
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Sometimes it feels like i'm losing control,have i ever had it at all?,all of this s**t is taking it's toll,feeling unstable about to fall,momentary la..
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Six feet under silence my loyal friend,laying in my coffin/sleep all day,on a mountain danced the dance of death,reaper always near judges every move ..
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people withouta care entertained and fed,while bums outside search for their daily bread,pretty neon signs pollute our skies,for corperate greed we al..
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nights that last an eternity,perils that seem like infinity,alone with my thoughts,an internal battle is fought,shadows of past ghosts linger,wake wit..
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Life.time.pizza boats.
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save the blind tiger.
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