Aaron Burnette

Posted 17 Years Ago

Thanks for the review.
The form I was using was a paradelle.
Basically, you write a line, repeat, write another line, repeat then take all the words you used in those two lines to create two new lines. You do that for three stanzas, then in the last stanza you take all the words you used in the poem to create all new lines.

I love the effect of the poem, and in that one I cut out the repeating. I've written about five or six poems in that form, and I just love it.

Posted 17 Years Ago

thanks for the review...

Posted 17 Years Ago

of course I will... just let me get to it, k...

Posted 17 Years Ago

David Sedaris recently came to Albany. I LOVE him. It was a great show. Were you there?

Posted 17 Years Ago

Hello thanks much for adding me!

Posted 17 Years Ago

Welcome to Write-off! We look forward to your participation!

Posted 17 Years Ago

Hey Aaron...the good news is that you escaped Ohio....LOL...have a great day!

Posted 17 Years Ago

thank you aaron. i really appreciate your review.
i read a few of your pieces and really liked them. you write from your life and everything rings true, full of humor, honesty and the what's this life all about curiosity of the human experience. good work.
glad to be friends.
john

Posted 17 Years Ago

not too much my dear :) i had a beautiful relaxing sunday... you?

<3kara

Posted 17 Years Ago

Well, thank you so much for the wonderful review of "Beyond my Horizon"! Your words are well recieved! I hope you have an amazing day.

:)
Sarah