Max Murphy

I'm part of a small writing community which has proved an excellent resource and improved my writing considerably....

Can't get feedback? Don't know what you're doing right or wrong?
Want 300-1000 words per review?

Literati Sedition: A writer's best nightmare.

A new look at your writing with brutally detailed critiques. Each review covers multiple aspects like dialogue, characters, plot, credibility, structure, and more. Learn to cut all your flaws. Find out what you’re doing wrong off the page as well as on it.

A free group for the intense pursuit of literary excellence through original novels and short stories. Become tomorrow’s revolutionary authors today.
Go to http://litsedition.spruz.com/
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Damn.
You got another two-sentence review.
It’s messy, misspelled, and the second sentence is just a demand that you look at the reviewer’s writing.

When was the last time someone gave you more than a scrap of useful advice? And no, telling you that your grammar is off doesn’t count as a “in-depth constructive criticism.”

http://litsedition.spruz.com/
A writer’s best nightmare.
A new look at your writing with brutally detailed critiques.
Each review covers multiple aspects like dialogue, characters, plot, credibility, structure, and more. Find out what you’re doing wrong off the page as well as on it.

Learn the why, when, how, and where of all your flaws.
Get advice on how to fix them and how to avoid them for good.

What You Get:
-600-1000 word reviews from the Admin.
-300 words from each member.
-Only members see your writing.
-Edit your story? You'll get fresh reviews on it from other members and the Admin.
-Interaction outside your genre.
-Critique others and improve your ability to see flaws.
-Eager readers will encourage you to write often and finish what you start.

Sounds good?
Take a peek @ our Rules here: http://litsedition.spruz.com/emn-rules.htm
Good luck!