the best reviews comes with compassion the meeting of emotions,
for no-one knows what is bad poetry but the reader who fails to understand,,thank you so much cylis ,
for being that one in a million friends who speaks truth thu compassion..peace wizthom
Thanks for the review. I struggled with writing that scene, it's been done and undone many times. Though, at current count I'm at 120,000 words total, I need to trim a lot down.