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About Me

I have been trying to write my own pieces for awhile now, but I never really had that excess drive through the assistance of other people. This site seems like a perfect way for me to express myself, meet new people, and really find a way to get my ideas down on paper. I am really new at the whole writing scheme however, and I really hope I get better at planning and writing in general. Thanks for checking my profile out, guess we may hit an exchange of writing. I really respect intellectual reading and I love anything exciting. God bless you all! ~cor1


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Posted 17 Years Ago


I'm getting such a great response... and I'm happy with the edit I did, so I just may try to get it published somewhere. I still am a teeny bit unsure if its ready for that, but there's no harm in trying I suppose. I'll never know unless I try right? And you're right, people do need stories from the heart.

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KeMari

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Sweet, that's gonna be about how long I'll be up, at least. I'll definitly have it up by then, provided I don't hit some serious writers block, which I can feel coming, but may not. Anyway, I'll probably start in a little while, for now i'm takin a short break. I've been writing for hours.

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thanks for the review on Chapter Four of my book! Very encouraging, and I hope to have Chapter Five posted early tomorrow [if not tonight... lol].

-7h3fr34k

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thank you so much for your amazing and kind review of Tuesday, You Broke Me.. It's a bittersweet story for me and took a long time to write.

I literally just changed a few things as per some people's suggestions. One of them being the part about Pompeii. It did resemble the aftermath of a volcano... and when I was there, I could only wonder if that is how it was like in Pompeii so many years ago..

But again, thank you so much =)

xo,
KeMari

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Slight edit on Chapter Two, describes the mysterious dude some more. Check it out after you finish reading my review.

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Dude, you got a second part up already, nice, cant wait to review it, it's really good.

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thanks for the helpful review! IT's funny, but I didn't even notice those repititions, and I am very grateful that you pointed them out! When I read my own work, it's just like I'm talking to myself, and I'll catch a wayward phrase every now and then, but I'll let some redundancy slip through! ^_^ Wow, I'm so pleasantly shocked that you enjoyed the story so much! Thanks again!

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thanks much for the review.

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thank you for your review! Sorry that mine was so short... I actually wrote two, and the first review didn't work.

Yes, Jesus was definitely the inspiration for "Time To Remember"... I feel I owe Him so much, and that I don't write about Him enough. He gave me a love for writing, so I want to give Him the glory by leading people to the Cross. Your poem was such an inspiration! Have a blessed day!